I write and I write
People read and they read
But they never tell me
What I really need
.
They say it was good
They tell me I’m great
It sounds sugar-coated
Give it to me straight!
.
What I need to know
Is what I did wrong
Was my spelling atrocious?
Is the story too long?
.
Was the plotline weak?
Was it too farfetched?
Do the words I use
Make you vomit and wretch?
.
Please don’t be gentle
Don’t try to be nice
Please tell the truth
Please, please , criticise
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Hahaha! Amazing..something that every writer desires! An honest evaluation of his/her works! ☺
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There’s one thing that could be fixed… yea… nope I’ve got nothing. Your work is amazing without any doubt. I’m sure everyone else agrees so don’t wait to receive criticism from others because you’ll be waiting for way longer than you can imagine.
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Maybe that’s actually why I wrote it, so people tell me that they can’t find anything to criticise 😉
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Well, that’s a smart move you’d have played ☺️ Either way I wouldn’t change my comment because it’s the obvious truth that I’m stating
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So where do you think your weakness lies?
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Oh. Erm… Repetition, maybe. I don’t know
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