Would you run into a burning building
Bucket of water in hand
And when reprimanded by the fire brigade
Argue “I was just trying to help”
Would you waltz into an operating theatre
Start cutting open a patient
And when on the dock in court
Argue “I was just trying to help”
Would you enter the field of play
When watching your favourite football team
On the verge of a crushing defeat
And try to score
And while being escorted from the ground
Argue “I was just trying to help”
Yet why do so many offer advice
To those suffering from depression
Advice like “You just need to think positively”
“Just smile and everything will be fine”
“Life’s too short to be miserable”
With just a cursoryย thought as to the value
Because the last thing these statements will ever do
Is help
Masterfully developed until the painful truth is said
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Thank you. ๐
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This is so humorous; so beautiful!! Uniquely rare one, insdeed!! ๐
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Thanks! ๐๐
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You are welcome!! ๐
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Yes, yes and yes! I hate being told these things, especially from people who really matter to me. And this is why depression can be so secretive, because it’s not understood how we can’t just “cheer up”, so many people equate being sad to having depression… and sadly some people will never understand no matter what.
Take care x
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YES! I resonate so much with this. Sometimes, advice isn’t what’s needed. Sometimes it’s enough to just be there. You don’t always have to try and fix stuff. Fabulous piece, brilliant writing.
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Thank you ๐
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You’re welcome. ๐
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You have wonderful writing style. Great poem.
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๐Thank you so much
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